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Flik 05 Jun 2013

Love the dragon (and its many eyes too)! Bran seems to be taking his new arm fairly well, though it'd be difficult to think about with a large grumpy dragon in front of you.

Also, if you change the speech bubble in the fourth panel to say, "Uh...was this really necessary?" it would sound a bit more proper. Hope that helps!

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avianwings 26 Jan 2014

The comic's been great so far! :) Just a note, in the bottom right, one of the bubbles says, "Uh ... It was really necessary?" I believe the "it" and "was" should be switched.
-Wing